Wednesday, 4 December 2013

Mrs D

I like your facts about film. Interesting song choice! Your 3rd draft is getting there - well done. The structure and pace is better. Think about the text and the use of sound to add impact. Well done for all your blogging - keep up the good work.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks! I also think the trailer is coming along nicely. We are planning to work on the text and sound today.

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