- Add more 'shocking' scenes
- Think about iconography
- Is the killer male or female?
- Brute force shows masculinity
- Great Storyline
- Pictures of the girls 'news flash' is excellent
- Camera filter is good
- Text could be a tiny bit slower
- Possibly more footage
- Nice transitions
- Great use of MES
- Nice setting of the scenes with captions
- Seems to be lots of dead body shots
- Nothing that really builds the storyline for viewer
- Love the music
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