Monday, 14 October 2013

Mrs D

Well done Nicole. You have used a good variety of ICT and your planning is detailed and thorough. You have got some good ideas in your storyboard. I like the POV camera shots - maybe get one in there earlier when they start the filming. I like the use of fragmentation of the killer's body. Go back to the criteria and make sure you have hit level 3/4. Also you need to work on the structure. Do the time line task for your RMAs to support this.

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