Well done for improving Question 1. It seems strange that you talk about the c and cs of a trailer and then move to your ancillary tasks. Get rid of the ancillary tasks at this point. The theory is good and the visuals match well to what you are saying. To improve, lower the volume of the sound when you are talking as it becomes difficult to hear (this is when you are talking about the use of sound). when talking about text it is just a blank screen. Well done you are nearly there.
Thank you for your feedback. I will edit question 1 accordingly and also question 2 based on the verbal conversation we had on Thursday. I will then upload them to my blogger.
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