Update 39

Over the course of the day I have edited evaluation questions 1. and 3. However because question 3 is updated on a Prezi it automatically updates the slideshow anywhere its featured. Because of this I haven't done a secondary post as it would look as though I am posting the same show twice. So instead here's a list of updates I did:

• Changed the order of subjects from poster - trailer - website to trailer - poster - website. This makes the whole show flow slightly better
• Originally I had the show and at the end a list of things I had learnt from audience feedback. However I have now tried to integrate the points into the rest of the show so it feels less disconnected but have still let the list at the end just to define it a but more.
• I have added a LOT more detail to the Prezi as a whole, including more quotes and screenshots from my audience feedback.
• I have also made it so that when there is a video the Prezi zooms in slightly further to make video viewing clearer
• I have tried to explain our reasons for taking the audience feedback on board for example when I talk about the audience not understanding what exactly was going on at first so changing our trailer as they suggested to help them understand.
• When writing I tried to get across the information in a concise way whilst still giving enough information so that the presentation wouldn't get boring. 

I still need to change a couple of typo's/spelling mistakes and also add a tad more information into the website section. I also need to link it to where I have mentioned it in the slogan section of the 'Trailer' feedback. I also feel as if I could possibly link it back to the question even more.

I then moved on to work on question 1. I have finished up the first section about the trailer and have now also done the second section regarding the Poster. All that is left now is the website section and a brief conclusion. Unfortunately I was unable to finish them tonight as it got to late.

Also tomorrow I plan to work on question 2. I hope to add more detail as at the moment it is quite vague being only 54 seconds long however I believe it has some good links to genre. I also want to talk about 'HOW' it creates intrigue, etc.