Based on the feedback from Miss Dobbs and the notes I made in Update 38 last night I have edited evaluation question 3. I have tried to make it more to the point. and corrected the its to it's. I have changed the wording in areas and added in the target audience ages.
I am now going to work on evaluation question 1. First I need to finish editing the final section of the script. Then I will need to record the final section about the website from the script update and also any new lines I add into the old sections. I will then edit these into my video.
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