Update 40 - Feedback from Miss Dobbs

This Feedback has come from the past couple of days so regarding some of the feedback I have already made updates whereas with others I have not.

Question 1.

• Good use of split screen
• Better if the images reflected what you were saying
• Music = vague
• Editing of trailer needs to be mentioned - purpose of a trailer - enigma code - what have you done to meet this - establishes the characters and a little bit of the narrative (as well as genre but you have already done this well) - Mention the text in the trailer more (allows you to get across information more quickly, it anchors the narrative) - structure, doesn't have to be in chronilogical order (Where does your trailer start?) - Need to mention our logo

Question 2.

• Good links to genre
• Vague - only really looks breifly at the subject
• 'How' does it
• Need to talk about how text creates a house narrative

Question 3.

• The footage we shot was good
• Very text heavy
• Start by saying who your target audience is
• The reactions belong to the people' (add ')
• Include quotes and ideas
• Cut it down - prioritise
• LESS WAFFLING!!!
• Have the trailer section first
• Change the its to it's
• What have you learnt from the video - link to the importance of institution.
• Be consise